ohmycupcakes!!!!!!!!!! i am so mad @ my computer! so yeah, i haven't exactly posted since Dec 22 . . . yeah, about that. my computer wouldn't let me post. it kept on deleting the stuff i wrote after i wrote it . . . oh well. srry! :)
so i have been getting comments about ppl asking if i can add another section of my book onto my blog. To give you some background, Alex, Felix, Destiny, and Jacob r flying from the sky to the Earth on a dragon named Betsy.
I ripped off the bandage around my head and stared at it. What had once been cream-colored was now almost completely red with blood, and blotches of white every once in a while. I threw it out into the open where it soared silently down to Earth. That’s when I noticed that I was still in my nightgown which was ripped, bloodied and dirty from head to toe. I probably looked like I got hit with a semi-truck on a dirt road. I could go to Prom!
Besides my lustful charms, I have a million more problems. Why am I doing this? Why can’t I be with my step-dad right now having a picnic or going to the park like we always did? I need to nail someone with a hammer. Although I hated the orphanage to the ends to the earth, at least it was better than the condition I am in right now. What is with the Asi dude, anyway? If he wants to be famous or whatever he could just ask to be another prince like the Ice Prince did, he doesn’t have to go killing people by the dozen. Why is he after my family, the tweed? He seriously needs mental help. And Felix, the big, fat, ugly guy that’s sitting in front of me, he needs a life more than anything else. Alright, alright, I admit he’s got okay looks, but I hate him and he probably hates me, too. He acts like he’s all this and all that, like he’s some goody-goody gumdrop. As soon as we land I’ll smash his tiny little hallow head with a tree trunk.
“Mmrr,” Betsy moaned to signal that we were descending slowly. Clouds passed us by like light cars on a highway. Earth started making its way into my sight. Ah, beautiful Earth! The place that I had once lived in only three days ago, though it seemed longer than that. If my stupid memory hadn’t remembered Jasmine’s name then maybe I could still be in the orphanage kicking Teacher butt and having the time of my life.
Below cities formed and color began to paint the scene. Soon enough, all the clouds vanished from my sight and we could see perfectly. It was such a beautiful summer night with the temperature just right and the England city lights twinkling below us. I felt as though I could jump off Betsy and fly through the night.
But of course, in my life, nothing ever goes perfectly. “Aroo,” Betsy cried and then took a sudden turn, flipping sideways and making us all dangle by our arms.
“Betsy!” Jacob screamed as he kicked the large animal helplessly. “What the bleep are you doing?” I was losing my grip quickly and I was afraid Destiny and her dainty little hands was going to fall off.
Betsy twirled her way over so she was flat again. The four of us angrily made our way back to a sitting position. “Betsy,” Felix gave her a hard slap on the back, “You know not to do that!” Betsy moaned sorrowfully then continued to sniff the air. “Betsy?” the tone in his voice made it seem like he was actually sorry for the dumb thing. It had just tried to flip us over, you dumbnut!
Betsy made a quick two hundred and seventy degree angle as she plummeted toward the Earth. Meanwhile, a humongous rock hardly larger than the dragon zoomed over our heads without warning.
“We’re being followed!”
17 comments:
'Sup Jesusfreak, I dunno if you're English, as in, PROPER english, but you should stay within your limit. What I mean is, if you're from America, you should write about people that come from America. If you write about people from the United Kingdom and aren't English, your readers just aren't going to get that authentic feel. Rick Riordan writes stuff that takes place in America, with Americans. Charlie Higson is an English author who writes about things that take place strictly in the U.K. It's alright if your characters travel to a foreign place, but please don't make the actual character foreign to you. And if your characters DO travel, you should be careful. Make sure you get the civilian lingo correct. That should give your reader an overall authentic feel. It will seem as if the events in your book seem as if they actually took place.
Hey,
I just luvwriting, and ohmycupcakes, I think you know who I am as in LUNALOVEGOOD.
Anyway
CHEESE AND SPRINKLES
You need to post some more!!!!!!!!!
Hey, that Anonymus post, that was me. Ya know, the REALLY long one about You should only write 'bout Americans? That was me. I put anonymous 'cause no one takes me seriously.
YOU NEED TO POST MORE!!
I agree with $WAGDADDY!!!!!
i LOVE THE BOOK AND THINK YOU SHOULD POST MORE OFTEN.
PS: I KNOW I SAID THIS ALREADY:)
Tired of waiting for new posts.........UGHHHHH!!!
Your book seems like the fantasy version of Maximum Ride. You could get fined for stuff like that.
i agree wif solnumviris, yor book DOEZ soud alot like maximum ride..........WAT IS SOLNUM ANYWAY?!?!?!?!?
Anonymous,
yep, I'm American. thnx for the great tips! but, you see, the reason why my characters travel to the U.K. is to reach the place called "Excalibur." the legend of Excalibur was placed in Wales a long time ago. I twisted the legend slightly so that the Excalibur rock was actually a door and the sword was a key. the actual characters are american, coming from San Francisco, California. I'll try to tie more reality into the fiction so, as you said, the events actually took place.
thank you!
nice, sam, why did you think i was english, as in, PROPER english? or was that just part of the whole "Anonymous" thing?
sorry, again, to evrybody about the whole "not posting" deal. Again, my computer refused to let me post. it has serious issues!
yep, i'll post a TON more. like, at least once a week!
okay, yeah, it seems like MR. I'M CHANGING IT!
i'll make sure i'm not FINED for anything . . . (if only i could get James Patterson to check out my blog)
and Anonymous, Solanum is a virus that you get before you turn into a zombie. ugghh . . . yeah, she's obsessed with them.
boo zombies!
Hai!!
I think your blog is made of epicness!!!
How'd you get your blog to be so successful???
My blog only has 23 veiwers:(
An only ONE comment.
I KiNDa envy you.
BUT i still think that you rock!
sorry about that, I accidentaly deleted my comment:P oops!
is that pink box supposed to be a video? cuz if it is, i cant click on it. . .
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